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    main..... tum ....aur tum bhi
    aao milkar
    phir ekatrit karen..
    tukde..katrane aur frame...
    apne rang birange sapnon ke...
     
    veh kitne bhi
    badrang ...chaknachoor kyun na hon
    unke kuch awshesh
    to honge hi....
     
    aao
    unhen batoren
    joden...chipkayen..
     
    unka mool swaroop
    wapas aa na paye shayad
    phir bhi...
     
    inse bayen hum
    ek adhunik...yatharthwadi
    collage..
     
    aur pradarshit karen
    use duniya ke samaksh
    ek
    amooly kalakriti ke roop mein
     
     
     
    10:00 PM | Blog it | kavitayen

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    Troublewrote:
    har ek shabd ek moti hai
    jise tu ek mala mein piroti hai
    main ka yeh ek pyala hai
    pyala kya, madhushala hai
    July 19
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:

    Darr ke baad he

    prem aataa hai

    Jaise raat kai baad din

    Per na jane kyon

    darte hain hum sabhi

    Tootne se

    Khatam ho jane se

    Jaan kar bhi

    ki jo satya hai

    vah abhang hai,

    chirrantan hai.

     

    Prem ek anant dharaa hai

    jo bhang nahin hoti kabhi

    bus roop badalti hai her ghadi

     

    Prem khatan nahin hota kabhi

    Jo khatam ho jaye woh prem nahin.

    Jo toot kar bikhar jaye woh dil nahin

    Jo jeekar marey nahin woh insaan nahin.

    July 18
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:

    kopal toot kar khilti hai

    beej phatata kar bikhartaa hai

    Raat jaag kar he taare gine jatey hai

    Prem mein bheeg kar he kavita jaagti hai

    Raah khulne per he manzilain nazar aati hain

    Raat ke khatam hone per he nayi subah aati hai.

     

     

    July 18
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:
    Purana ghar tootne per he
    hum naya ghar bastaa hain
     
    Purani fasal katne per he
    hum nayi fasal lagatain hain
     
    Porana saathi bichadnay per he
    hum naya haath thamtey hain
     
    Porana dil ujadne par he
    hum naya dil paatey hain
     
    aur porani ghadi beetne per he
    hum nayi ghadi mein jaate hain.
     
     
     
    July 18
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:

    Such yahi to daar hai sabko

    bhang hone ka

    toot jaane ka

    khatam ho jaane ka

    phir ye darr he jeeta hai

    hum nahin

    woh he karaata hai saare kaam

    hum nahin

    Prem me tootne ka darr nahin hota

    prem jaanta hai

    tootne mein he jeevan hai

    bhikharne mein hi jeevan hai

    Khulne mein he jeevan hai

    band kamron mein bhala

    phool ugaa kartey hain kabhi

    band dilon mein bhala

    pyaar jagaa hai kabhi.

    July 18
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:
    woh bhi kya jeevan hai
    jisnay kabhi tootna seekha nahin
    tootnay, khilnay aur khulnay
    main he hota hai
    her naya janam.
     
    Jisnay tootna seekh liya
    samjho usne jeena liya seekh
     
    Jissay tootnay ka darr nahin
    way he karr saktain hain
    shrishti ka her karya pooraa
    baki to bus zaraa se
    tootnay se bhi darr jaatay hain.
     
     
    July 17
    Abhishek Joshiwrote:
    Kyon uthayein hum puraana sapna
    woh toota isii liye that
    ki hamein ek naya
    behtarr sapna bunna tha!
     
    To chalo phir mangain khuda se
    ek aur naya sapna
    apne liye aur is jahan kay liye
     
    Tootna, Bikhar jaana
    to bus eeshwar ki ek leela hai
    Vinaash to bus hota hai
    ek sopaan hai
    naye nirmaan ka.
     
    Tabhi to hum poojatein hain
    Shiv ko
    kyon Shiv he
    kartein hain,
    nayi shrishti ki
    shuruaat.
     
    Aur unkay puttra
    Ganesh ko he
    hum bulaatein hain
    Karnein har karya ka
    Shri Ganesh!
     
    July 16
    SAURABH DHALLwrote:
    hmmm....
     
    post like this requires a beautiful mind...and i am sure its not every1z job....
     
    u have so much of love and affection inside u .... u r an angel yaar....
     
    bahot hi achey ho aap....
     
    saurabh
    July 16
    Mandeep Singhwrote:
    .  .  . .
    tuta tuta ek parinda aise toota
    kabhi jud na paya
    loota loota  us ko jag ne aise  loota
    fir udd na paya . . . . . .   ( its a song . .  HINDI FILM SONG )
     
    hope we are able to undue some of the harm .
     
    so how are you PRATIMA . .  hows life goin / /  sorry was a lil busy these . . days .but now have some time free . . .  so hurray . .
    you tell wats up wid you ?
     
    Take Care , god bless all
    Much Love
    Mandoo
     
    July 16
    nandaniwrote:

    Hi!

    Just stoppd to say Hi, could'nt stop myself from reading this post...it is just beautiful...

    Here r some lines..just came to my mind.

    Kuch tukre mere dil ke bhi le lo

    banaa do unse aaise pratima

    jisko dekh kar har koi bole..

    khuda ke hai ye ek or anmol rachna...

    July 16

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